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the butterflies have turned John back into a boy and are fluttering
around him.
This
one was frustrating, not so much because I don't feel
it works, but because it is the furthest from my initial mental
image. I "saw" this one immediately, which is normally a
great sign. For some reason though, in execution, it drifted
farther and farther from what I had imagined. Looking at it now, I
think it's okay, but it isn't the painting I had in my head.